ext_277279 ([identity profile] firlefanzine.livejournal.com) wrote in [community profile] ci5_boxoftricks 2015-10-07 06:44 pm (UTC)

I really love your story!

The plot is great, and the boys are spot on. And I like it very much when ther are good 'minor characters'.

I really had to grin at "Easy on, old son. Just waiting for Ray to make his move"
The whole scene is brilliant.

But I was a bit sad in the end that Breen had to die... *sigh*

Thank you so much!


"And get a haircut."
*g*



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