Thank you three times - once for reading it three times (wow!), once for your wonderful comments (thank you!) and once for being my beta (you nutter! Of course you're a proper beta reader!). You made it so much better by your helpful confusion about who was saying what *G* and making me realise that no one else could see them saying the lines, so I had to make it clear who was saying what. I have very fond memories of you counting back up lines and lines of dialogue, going, 'Bodie, Doyle, Bodie, Doyle, Bodie, Doyle, Bodie, Doyle - no - was that Bodie? Who said that?' You also saved someone from having three hands, and from walking out of a room that they weren't in yet, and similar stupidities, so massive thanks to you!