I think you did such a good job with this story. You've taken canon details and built an entire story around them, plus you've worked in Doyle's former life so well. Really an enjoyable read. I appreciate that you had Bodie, while not pleased with what he discovers, not act like a teenage girl (beg). He works through his new knowledge and comes out caring about Doyle even more than before all of this happened, and admiring how Doyle survived his early life. Nicely done!