Great story! I really liked how you managed to get by the cuteness of the Harry Potter universe (and I do like the Harry Potter universe,) so that Bodie and Doyle were true to form. Bodie's origins were a welcome surprise. And the sex between them sizzled!
My only complaint is that I didn't want to leave that particular "universe." :-)
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My only complaint is that I didn't want to leave that particular "universe." :-)