Not So Good News: Story is clearly going to need more like 25,000...
I had this massive overhaul of it after my moments of 'I hate this story and the horse it rode in on' and I think I've fixed the main issues but it's just... going to need so many more wooooooords *fingers numb with typing*
I know I am way past preaching to choir on this one here, but Long!Fic is HARD, so much harder than just a longer short!fic...
Heh, I'm still making sense in the fic at least. At least, I think so...
*returns to where she has left Bodie and Doyle on an emotionally-laden walk to an ice-cream vendor*
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Not So Good News: Story is clearly going to need more like 25,000...
I had this massive overhaul of it after my moments of 'I hate this story and the horse it rode in on' and I think I've fixed the main issues but it's just... going to need so many more wooooooords *fingers numb with typing*
I know I am way past preaching to choir on this one here, but Long!Fic is HARD, so much harder than just a longer short!fic...
Heh, I'm still making sense in the fic at least. At least, I think so...
*returns to where she has left Bodie and Doyle on an emotionally-laden walk to an ice-cream vendor*