Date: 2010-10-06 04:45 pm (UTC)
Gripping plot wonderfully told. Almost reminded me of HRs stories in it's vulnerable parts. Love the dialogue Firle pointed out above. Great moments. And the small things you suddenly detect- more greyish hair (Doyle's grey temples are so damn sexy!!!), wrinkles, hidden by the look of love until then. So true.

I think Bodie's heart would melt at that proof of mortality.

Although Bodie slept with an imposter, he didn't recognize it's not him- disappointing or it's a super twin imposter! :DJust a detail: The moment when Bodie got the information that Doyle would disappear, out of CI5, there I would have expected more emotional reaction from Bodie. He's been patient, he waits, did what he was told, and Doyle would just disappear without telling him a word. My stomach would churn, and I would fume a moment later after all he's endured.

Those restrained British types!

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