Broken Trust (merentha13)

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Title: Broken Trust
Author: merentha13
Artist: bodiecuddle
Archive to Pros Lib: Yes
Genre: Slash
Characters/Pairing: Bodie/Doyle
Word count: 25,500
Warnings: None

Summary: Doyle has betrayed CI5 and Bodie… or has he? Will Bodie set aside his hurt and anger, to find his missing partner.

Notes: I bothered many people in the writing of this story. I want to thank you all for the advice, information and encouragement. You all know who you are! Special thanks to callisto65 for the early beta and grammar lesson, to firlefanzine for being the best cheerleader ever! And piskiedust for a thorough beta, brit check and lots of support. (Ray wants to send out a thanks to dawnebeth without whose medical advice I’d have had him dead around Chapter 13 (too much “h” in the “h/c” *g*) And a big “THANKS” and “Well Done, Mate” to my vidder bodiecuddle. The Video is terrific!

All mistakes herein are mine. And as usual, I’ve only borrowed the characters. No copyright infringement intended.

I hope you all enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed taking part in the challenge!

Art Master Post

Fic Master Post on AO3/ Broken Trust

Fic Master Post on lj/Broken Trust Part 1
Fic Master Post on lj/Broken Trust Part 2
Fic Master Post on lj/Broken Trust Part 3


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Comments

[liriel1810.livejournal.com]

The month has only just started and I'm already behind in reading! ack!

Thank you so much for all your efforts. I do love some Doyle whumpage so I'm really looking forward to reading this! I'll be back to comment again when I have read (but that might take a while - sorry). Cheers!

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

Looks good. Congratulations on a succesful posting.

[firlefanzine.livejournal.com]

*blushes*
It was honour and joy to watch the story grow! Thank you for the opportunity.
It's very heatbreaking and dramatic and I can highly recommend it! :-)
And the video shows perfectly the hard times they have to go through.

[snailbones.livejournal.com]

Congratulations on getting it posted!

It looks great, and I can't wait to read it, thank you.

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Thanks! This being my first attempt at a long story, I'd appreciate any and all comments about what worked for you and what didn't! I hope you enjoy it.

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Getting all the formatting and links to work was almost harder than writing the story!!! There is a reason some people were not meant to interact with computers! *g* I'm glad its posted, finally.*heavy sigh....)

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Thank you again, for everything!

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I hope you will enjoy it!

[bodiecuddle.livejournal.com]

Big Big Squeezing Hugs to you Mate!!!!!

After month of thoughts and being nervous it is finally done.

The story is FANTASTIC!!!! and it was a pleasure for me to try a bit of artwork (Vid) to it.

Cheers mate xx

[bodiecuddle.livejournal.com]

Thank you!!!

For me it was really honour to work for herand doing a vid.

Wow, what a great story. It wasn`t easy to be silent so long and not telling anybody about it.

[scherwood]

whaaa~ love the summary. *excited*

*saving to my kindle*

[inlovewithboth.livejournal.com]

What an intriguing plot *shakes Bodie hard by the shoulders*, "No Bodie, use your brain, there's no way Doyle would do this! Trust him!" and then... "will you hurry up,look what they're doing to him!" Thank you Merentha for a great story and a huge dose of H/C. And I loved Bodiecuddle's vid too, it summed it up beautifully. xx

[bodiecuddle.livejournal.com]

yeah... Merentha did a very great job, Her first long story .. and the first Big Bang one..

Hats off!!!! Bodie and Doyle are so real here.. Ahh I love it!!

[shooting2kill.livejournal.com]

Sorry, I'm going mad and thought my original post was in the wrong place but it wasn't so the original sentiments still stand: I really liked your vid!

[shooting2kill.livejournal.com]

It's great seeing your story 'up in lights' (so to speak!) and I'm looking forward to having a nice, leisurely read of it. Well done and thank you for sharing your work.

all done!

[piskiedust.livejournal.com]

Hi there

Great to see the story up! It has been fun to read/ check for you.
I hope it wasn't too much of a wrench to let the story go and get it posted!

Brilliant job

[saintvic.livejournal.com]

Yay so glad to see this up, I am downloading it as soon as I have finished tyoing this comment and am really looking forward to reading this.

[murphybabe]

Well, again, I should have been working but...

Massive congratulations to you both for fic and vid. Poor Bodie. Idiot Bodie. Fancy believing his Doyle would betray him! Poor Doyle for getting whumped so badly.

This kept me gripped all the way through. Thank you for a great effort.

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Big hugs back at you! The vid is wonderful and I'm still amazed at how fast you put it together! We did good! *g*

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

It's so cool that my story will be on a Kindle! Almost makes you feel like a real writer! I hope you enjoy it.

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much for the kind words! This was a first for both Bodiecuddle and myself and we were quite nervous. I'm so glad it worked! (and it is a beautiful vid!)

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Thank you! I appreciated your looking it over all those weeks ago. I hope you enjoy the finished version.

Re: all done!

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Thank you, for the kind words and all your input along the way! I was "playing" with it right up to the last minute... but I'm glad it is finally "all done"!

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

I'm glad it finally posted too! Enjoy it!

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Thanks! I'm glad it kept you interested - I've not written anything near this long before and I was afraid it might drag.