A Game of Two Halves by JoJo

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Title: A Game of Two Halves
Author: JoJo
Artist: roven75
Archive to Pros Lib: Yes
Genre: Slash
Characters/Pairing: Bodie/Doyle
Word count: 20,574

Summary:  Football is not a matter of life and death.  It's much more important than that.

To the lovely roven75, constant_muse, londonronnie and probodie - many thanks, mateys!  All mistakes my own.

Link to Fic: Fic Master Post/A Game of Two Halves
Link to Art: Art Master Post

Comments

[potztausend.livejournal.com]

I just read the story and it's great. First it is the "construction" of the story, like football, the two different points of view (two halves of a game) and the extra time. It is the way you didn't write what happened at the end of part two, and I had to read the extra time oh so quickly, because I was *really* afraid. That is building up tension!

Second it is the way you are writing. Nothing soppy, no hours-long-discussions about their relationship, but just both men acting like they would in an episode (well.. with a bit of afters added *g*).

[solosundance.livejournal.com]

Yay, I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for letting me know that the construction worked for you, that you felt some of the tension (eeep, sorry for the scare!) and that the lads were recognisable - I really appreciate that :D