Typos anywon?
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ci5_boxoftricksI needed a break from editing my BB story. I find my fingers fly faster than my brain and I thought I'd share a few of the results. Anyone else want to play?
"What the duck did you do that for?"
He poured himself a trouble scotch.
He took pleasure in Bodie's oblivious discomfort.
His voice was hard as he felt the meat of his anger...
They shat staring at each other.
He checked his bun. One bullet left.
"What the duck did you do that for?"
He poured himself a trouble scotch.
He took pleasure in Bodie's oblivious discomfort.
His voice was hard as he felt the meat of his anger...
They shat staring at each other.
He checked his bun. One bullet left.
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Date: 2011-08-17 10:46 pm (UTC)Quack quack!
'Oblivious discomfort' at least sounds plausible!
*snicker* Couples who shit together, stay together!
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Date: 2011-08-18 12:53 am (UTC)I've run into that, too. A few from my BB:
- "I will upload the honor of the house."
- “And so you ate the renowned Raimondo Della Straniero?”
Flyin' fingers, flyin' fingers. :Dno subject
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Date: 2011-08-18 01:31 am (UTC)I had a funny one in my story.
...yet God chose him to falafel that position
Apparently I was hungry when I wrote that line. *snirk*
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Date: 2011-08-18 02:43 am (UTC)falafel and fishes? Hmmmm... yes, I'm hungry too. :D
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Date: 2011-08-18 02:42 am (UTC)Should he be feeling his meat in public?Thanks for sharing. :Dno subject
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Date: 2011-08-18 03:34 am (UTC)I just heard Bodie's voice saying "Oi! Less of the small." *g*
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Date: 2011-08-22 09:51 pm (UTC)Very soon his voice wasn't the only hard thing there.
Oh my. *mad giggle of total exhaustion*
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Date: 2011-08-18 06:46 am (UTC)Although I would keep an eye on that duck if it's making the lads do things...
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Date: 2011-08-18 10:54 am (UTC)LOL - Ah yes, the meat of anger... and the chicken thighs of contentment.
I love 'em all - thanks for the giggle.
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