Vice - by ILWB - Artwork by gblvr

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Title: Vice
Author: inlovewithboth
Artist: gblvr
Archive to Pros Lib: Yes
Genre: Slash
Characters/Pairing: Bodie/Doyle
Word count: 22,375
Warnings: Rape

Summary: "Part of life, it seems, is starting over again and again, each time a little smarter than the last." Brent Corrigan.

Notes: A vidder for two stories last year I was so impressed by The Pros Big Bang that I decided to both write and vid in 2011, despite me being a short story writer by preference. So was born my first ever story over 20,000 words which I lovingly dedicate to those who helped and encouraged me. Sabs, Jaicen, Andy, Judes, Rave, Sara and Aldene all gave me their time, support, advice and patience – thank you from the bottom of my heart, guys. And for those of you who have been trying to teach me the dark art of POV – I apologise. I tried, I promise I did. Finally thank you to our amazing Mods and my Artist gblvr. *inserts ‘we are not worthy’ icon here*

In this story I did something I swore I’d never do – I created family. And that leads me to the inspiration for the story; the troubled, much misunderstood and truly divine Brent Corrigan, who I believe is gorgeous both inside and out.

Link to Fic: Fic Master Post/Story Title
Link to Art: Art Master Post

Comments

[inlovewithboth.livejournal.com]

Thanks ever so much! I don't think I need POV help though, more like POV intensive therapy!

[sc-fossil.livejournal.com]

I've had a chance to read and I enjoyed your story. I liked your character Michael very much. It was nice seeing him go from a very unhappy, weepy man to a strong person. I liked that and I liked that he and Bodie (and Doyle) carved out their own relationships now. That was interesting and I can tell you put a lot of work into writing a long story. .

As for the POV, it was a bit of a roller coaster ride. However, that is easily fixed with a bit of guidance. Next time, eh? :)

Thanks for the story and also gblvr's art added to the enjoyment.

[inlovewithboth.livejournal.com]

Thanks ever so much, I'm really glad that the character development worked for you xx