Broken Trust (merentha13)

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Title: Broken Trust
Author: merentha13
Artist: bodiecuddle
Archive to Pros Lib: Yes
Genre: Slash
Characters/Pairing: Bodie/Doyle
Word count: 25,500
Warnings: None

Summary: Doyle has betrayed CI5 and Bodie… or has he? Will Bodie set aside his hurt and anger, to find his missing partner.

Notes: I bothered many people in the writing of this story. I want to thank you all for the advice, information and encouragement. You all know who you are! Special thanks to callisto65 for the early beta and grammar lesson, to firlefanzine for being the best cheerleader ever! And piskiedust for a thorough beta, brit check and lots of support. (Ray wants to send out a thanks to dawnebeth without whose medical advice I’d have had him dead around Chapter 13 (too much “h” in the “h/c” *g*) And a big “THANKS” and “Well Done, Mate” to my vidder bodiecuddle. The Video is terrific!

All mistakes herein are mine. And as usual, I’ve only borrowed the characters. No copyright infringement intended.

I hope you all enjoy reading this as much as I enjoyed taking part in the challenge!

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Comments

[halotolerant.livejournal.com]

Congrats on the first long story (I see from comments that this is, although I wouldn't have guessed from reading it) - it's a solid, intriguing plot that sets up very well for all the h/c (which I do enjoy!) and I liked all the CI5 familiar faces showing up (I love Murphy getting some time 'onscreen' *g*) and the typical Cowley 'triple think' and of course the reunion at the end with everything finally out in the open - I liked the integrated flashbacks throughout, showing us the emotional set up for the final pay-off *g*

The video is a great trailer/teaser for the fic and creates the right mood, as well as giving some lovely visuals to kick start the reading process *g*

[merentha13.livejournal.com]

Thank you so much! I really appreciate your comments. It was my first long story - my longest previous to this may have made 2500 words. I had a lot of help from my cheerleader(firlefanzine) and my beta (piskiedust)to keep the plot on course and they kept me from overindulging in the hurt part of the hurt/comfort! *g* I'm glad the flashbacks worked, I was worried I'd switched between 'time' too often.

and bc's vid was great, wasn't it!